3manonMusic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chocnoon - Falling Night ~AIM~ (DLVII)]

This piece seems so nostalgic lol. It really gives me dj-nate vibes. I do think it's quite repetitive, especially the first drop, but that's the genre ofcourse. Also, it might seem a bit double, because the whole reason why I find this piece nostalgic is also a bad thing. That's because the instrument quality really isn't the best. It just feels a bit thin and somewhat cheesy. I would personally something more emotional with picture. Other than that it's just a huge nostalgia trip that's jolly to listen to ^-^

[AIM - Madonna del Laco]

This gives me super Mario 64 vibes. Nice. I also get the reference to the art pretty much, except a problem I have with the whole piece is that I feel it's more centered around the lake itself, than the lady. Like it's very mysterious and eerie, like a swamp-ish lake would be. But when a huge majestic woman-fish hybrid would emerge from the lake, I personally picture something that's more epic and grand. There's also a lot of reverb, try to decrease a lot of it to get a better clearance on your sounds. Also I think it's pretty repetitive, a good thing you could do by avoiding that is adding and introducing new instruments and maybe even completely new segments. As of right now I personally don't hear enough instruments to keep me interested for 4 minutes long.

[AIM - Rampage of The Dark Paladin]

I don't have much to share in terms of feedback because I agree with the guy underneath me for most parts. What I do think is that the drums could have been a lot more punchier and more on the foreground. It was probably better if the bass was just louder in general. And yeaaaa try to fix that reverb soup in next songs.

[AIM - Nurture]

I like the creative rhythmic changes! Also very cutesy vibe, so definitely nailed the art comparison part. I do think that the whole song just overall sounds a bit thin. You would've definitely profited from more layering. I also think it's quite a bit repetitive, although I don't really think it's an issue due to the simple theme.
Good luck with the AIM!
Also lmao did you just hear mango eating asmr at the end that's hilarious af

Latadenata responds:

Thank you very much! I really appreciate it <3

[AIM - Pyromancers Village]

Beautiful work man. This sounds like it comes straight out of a videogame OST. It really has a great medieval vibe to it. Like some kind of troubadour sitting at a bar telling you a story. Some narration under this would fit really well too. There is something in the end that is a little bit offkey, it honestly sounds like a kazoo of some sorts. I like the fact that it's a bit out of tune, but I think if you made it slightly less out of tune it would work better. Great job for having everything recorded by yourself

[AIM 2024 - the emo machine with a side of cigarettes]

I really like this! My only big complaint is that the drums could've kicked in way earlier than they do now, because the first half is almost only guitar, it gets a bit repetitive. Second half really made the song for me

["I was there." [Art Inspired Music 2024]]

I love the piano and the soft melancholic melody. I think that if you added some ambience in the background, like some village sfx or whatever would fit the image, it would help filling in the many many silences there are. Also I think that the piano could have had a bigger dynamic range, cus like previously said already, this is very quiet. That's about it

LANPartyAnimal responds:

thank you for the feedback

[Atmosphere Disturbance]

Yoooo nice work!

[Cold Pillow]

This is very nice, although it would be a lot better if you put some more effort into making the piano more dynamic: right now it feels like a person is constantly hitting the piano very hard, which also makes it resonate a bit too much. You can see it very clearly in the audio itself: whenever the piano is gone, the db drops significantly
It's definitely somewhat repetitive as well, could use some variation
I like the strings though.

vietanh266 responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely try that in the future

[12 - Ash (Iota Album)]

Gorgeous